Here is the link to the audio of my IOC:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0utan58tTX0SWMwOEwwcGN2dE9nMXpKU1Vwa3BwZUxNNTdZ/view?usp=sharing
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Chosen passage: Page 80-81; Never Let Me Go by Kazuo Ishiguro
Criterion A: 8
I show a very good knowledge of the text by providing background and the impact the text has on the rest of the novel. I provide commentary of the events occurred during the text and use specific evidence to back up my claims.
Criterion B: 2
I did not really use or identify any literary devices. I need to work on a lot learning how to identify them better.
Criterion C: 3
It was decently organized. I paused a lot and was stuttering at times. I had a really long, awkward pause at the end. Need to work on that as well.
Criterion D: 3
I was fairly clear. A little stuttering as stated before.